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white line, sound by bymano white line, sound by bymano
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Avantgarde poem written while ago, combining 2 writtings -
a friend of mine writting's 'Cat' + the Romanian Nichita Stanescu poem about the egg
- playing typography -
(large view is better)
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Copacii verzi peste ovalul lui,
Boarfele întinse pe frânghie peste faţa mea,
Puţini trecători, claxoane, intersecţii. Înfiorări de vânt şi fum.
Hârşti-Hârşti

Ah îmi trec aburul prin pielea unui şarpe zdremţăros.
Cu aripi... creierul... şi-a zburat lebedele şi raţele.
Iar acest invizibil ce se slefuieşte de alt aer... este un ou.
(viitor)
Fâl-Fâl

Câtiva caţei...stăpâni la plimbare,
Pietre, învelite în muşchi, ce nu s-au născut
se freacă la ochi
Fâşşş-Fâşşş

Pomii matusalemici din pielea mea,
ma fac curb dimineata.
Strigatul cu miros acid, respiratia fara de vis
Il aud în fântâna arteziană
Clipoc-Clipoc.

Dansul meu unduios în alb verde şi galben
si castanii ce aşteapă lumina.
Eu sunt acela.
Dansez îmbrăcat, mult înfometat
ca un mic dejun de ou oval.
Toc-Toc
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translation with help of my nice friend :iconmarcusgravus:
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The green trees above his oval,
The clothes stretched on rope across my face,
Few passers-by, horns, crossroads, the thrill of wind and smoke.
Hârşti-Hârşti

I pass the stream the steam through the skin of a shaky snake
With wings ... in my brain ... flew the swans and ducks
and all was invisible and what you grind in the air...
is an egg.
(future)
Fal-Fal

Stones, wrapped in green moss, that were not born
rub their eye
Fâşşş-Fâşşş

The old trees in my skin,
contort me in the morn.
my screams smell of acid,my breath is without dreams and
can be heard in the fountain
Clipoc-Clipoc

My waves dance into white,green ,and yellow.
and chestnuts that wait for the light.
That's me
I'm dancing well dressed, long starved
like an oval egg breakfast.
Toc-Toc
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:iconcr2o3:
Cr2O3 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
so nice
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bymano Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Thanks for encouraging :)
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Cr2O3 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
:iconflowerplz:
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:iconhummbuzz:
hummbuzz Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
I have featured this image. [link] :sun:
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
thank you Yvette :hug:
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:iconhummbuzz:
hummbuzz Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
:heart:
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Campo-Diaz Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
Superb!.
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
thank you :bow:
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djailledie Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, you are the wavy dancer among the chestnuts, in harmony with nature? This sounds like a fairy tale!
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
yes Daniel. sounds great isn't it ;).
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:icondjailledie:
djailledie Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Great indeed!
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KanchanCollage Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011   Traditional Artist
Wondrous.
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
Thank you Kanchan :hug:
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:iconhummbuzz:
hummbuzz Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
(smile) :sun: Lovely, Manon.
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
thank you Yvette :)...
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
Bella! :clap:


(Code broken... adjust the code "Toc-Toc</Bb");)
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
thank you :)

- it was made to be one loooong looong paper, not squared, but for dA it's better in this way.
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
I've noticed that it was continuing horizontally ;)
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
ohh cool, un occhio bene :D
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
Giŕ, un buon occhio
un buon cuore
e una buona mente
nel cocktail c'č un altro ingrediente ;)
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
nessuno poteva trovare una migliore combinazione
claro clarisima moa moa
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:iconcaska1979:
caska1979 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
:meow:
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:iconmarcusgravus:
marcusgravus Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
oh! very well done...fascinating and charming too-impressive the way that you worked this,prietenul meu.
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
any contribution at English translation is welcome my friend.
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:iconmarcusgravus:
marcusgravus Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
ok....
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
take you time :D... no rush, and remember we have white line
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:iconmarcusgravus:
marcusgravus Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
I am looking at it now..will note you my opinions...
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:iconbymano:
bymano Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
good ;)
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